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April 25, 2011 - Updated version includes minor edits and a few rewrites in places.
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I really find Kelly's Pokemorph status cool and interesting.
Ahaha, I see Daisy ships her brother and Kelly already - that didn't take long! Though blackmail - yikes! That is one devious little girl. (...I love it!)
The explanation of a Pokémorph and how it affects Kelly was very detailed. I love the thought you've put into this!
The vid-calls were nice comic relief after that scene. And you handled the battle well, especially considering you found the episode a little dry to work with. (And to be honest I agree! )
If my reviews ever get too long, let me know! I get a little carried away~
Yes she does. And nope, sure didn't! ;D All it took was a picture she took
=] Thank you very much! @_@ And yes, I did. I think I spent at least 4 years, if not more refining the explanation. There's actually another, more detailed explanation on the website.
XD Thank you very much!
Don't worry. Make them as long as you want. ;D I like to read them. They make me smile!
Absolutely no clue if you know this, but I've written tons of different versions of KJ. XD The version you're reading right now has been written between 2007 and the current date. It's actually my longest and most revised piece of writing I've ever done (and I've done a lot).
Daisy didn't even appear in KJ until I wanted to make it into a radioplay. She's actually more or less a replacement for the Onlyinadreamshippingness I had originally wrote in the story. The 2005 version is actually a good example...
I'd want to watch them, though!