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Kelly's Journey - Episode 2 by TrainerKelly Kelly's Journey - Episode 2 by TrainerKelly

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April 25, 2011 - Updated version includes minor edits and a few rewrites in places.

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Episode 1 - [link]
Episode 2 - [link]
Episode 3 - [link]
Episode 4 - [link]
Episode 5 - [link]
Episode 6 - [link]
Episode 7 - [link]
Episode 8 - [link]
Episode 9 - [link]
Episode 10 - [link]
Episode 11 - [link]
Episode 12 - [link]
Episode 13 - [link]
Episode 14 - [link]
Episode 15 - [link]
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AshK1980 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
Good work on this chapter as well! Great work!
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TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
=D Thank you~
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AnimeRolePlayer71 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. It was a very well written re-write of the corresponding episode. You are very talented with it.

I really find Kelly's Pokemorph status cool and interesting.
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TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011
^^ Thank you very much!
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AnimeRolePlayer71 Featured By Owner May 1, 2011
You're welcome. :)
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the-dragon-childe Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
All right, chapter two! 8D First off, I like how the beginning jumps straight into the action! In media res is the term, I believe? Used to great effect here, I think. And, woohoo, first appearance of Team Rocket! (Do I spy a reference to Meowth's speech patterns in the Japanese version? :meow:)

Ahaha, I see Daisy ships her brother and Kelly already - that didn't take long! :XD: Though blackmail - yikes! That is one devious little girl. (...I love it!)

The explanation of a Pokémorph and how it affects Kelly was very detailed. I love the thought you've put into this!

The vid-calls were nice comic relief after that scene. :) And you handled the battle well, especially considering you found the episode a little dry to work with. (And to be honest I agree! :XD:)

If my reviews ever get too long, let me know! :D I get a little carried away~
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TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
8DDD YAY~ I was hoping you'd do another review 'cause it's fun to read them. Thanks~ XD I didn't really feel like it was necessary to tell people what Officer Jenny was saying (and, most likely, I don't think Kelly and friends would've heard her, especially since they were trying to get Pikachu to the Pokémon Center).

=P Yes she does. And nope, sure didn't! ;D All it took was a picture she took to blackmail them with to convince her to do so.

=] Thank you very much! @_@ And yes, I did. I think I spent at least 4 years, if not more refining the explanation. There's actually another, more detailed explanation on the website.

XD Thank you very much!

=P Don't worry. Make them as long as you want. ;D I like to read them. They make me smile!

Absolutely no clue if you know this, but I've written tons of different versions of KJ. XD The version you're reading right now has been written between 2007 and the current date. It's actually my longest and most revised piece of writing I've ever done (and I've done a lot).

Daisy didn't even appear in KJ until I wanted to make it into a radioplay. =P She's actually more or less a replacement for the Onlyinadreamshippingness I had originally wrote in the story. The 2005 version is actually a good example...Obviously I'm excited that you're reading it, so I'm rambling. XDD
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RussellStar Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd have to say this is probably one of my favorites.
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TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2009
Thank you! x3
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Blazikenerk Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2008
:omfg: :heart:! <33 Amazing job :hug:
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