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Kelly's Journey - Episode 14 by TrainerKelly Kelly's Journey - Episode 14 by TrainerKelly

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Surprise, surprise! (Not really.) Kelly's Journey episode 14 is up!

Summary: Kelly and friends are lost in a forest and end up at the lighthouse of the famous Pokémon researcher, Bill.

Basically, this is the KJ version of episode 13 of the first season.

Enjoy!

ALSO, HUGE SHOUT OUT TO :iconthe-dragon-childe:! She wrote up an episode transcript for me, which cut down the time of writing this episode QUITE greatly! So go thank her if you have a chance and you're a fan of KJ~

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Episode 1 - [link]
Episode 2 - [link]
Episode 3 - [link]
Episode 4 - [link]
Episode 5 - [link]
Episode 6 - [link]
Episode 7 - [link]
Episode 8 - [link]
Episode 9 - [link]
Episode 10 - [link]
Episode 11 - [link]
Episode 12 - [link]
Episode 13 - [link]
Episode 14 - [link]
Episode 15 - [link]
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AshK1980 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
Wow, TrainerKelly, this was another episode rewrite that was even better than the original episode. I really enjoyed the part with Daisy trying to get Ash and Kelly to dance with each other. It seems the more this story goes on, the better Ash and Kelly get along. Good job! I really don't understand how Misty doesn't recognize Ash as a true trainer just because Charmander and Squirtle decided to follow him on his journey. She never could get it through her head taht Ash captured Bulbasaur, Butterfree, and Pidgeotto. Also I think I figured out why Charmeleon stopped obeying Ash when it evolved. It never actually was originally Ash's Pokemon. I just think Charmeleon/Charizard were afraid that Ash would abandon it just like Damien did. It took getting frozen by a Poliwrath to finally get it to obey Ash. Good work on this story so far. Actually I sort of expect Charmeleon/Charizard to disobey Ash once it evolved since it used to belong to someone else. Keep up the awesome work! I look forward to Episode 15 of this awesome story!
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TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
>w< Thank you~ I'm so glad you thought so! This episode was a TON of fun to write (which is kind of weird to me, since I found the original episode rather boring).

8D I'm happy you enjoyed that part. That was fun to do. <3

>w<

Thanks~

o.o Yeah, I never really understand that either. I recall she brought it up quite a bit throughout the series, even though if one really thought about it, Ash did catch a lot of his Pokémon. And oh, that idea about the Charmeleon/Charizard makes a lot of sense! =o

x3 Thank you~ =D
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AshK1980 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
I will read this chapter later. I have some chores to do now! I like the way this story is turning out so far!
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TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
x3 Thank you~
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RussellStar Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Once again another great chapter TrainerKelly. I have to say I liked the whole part with Bill, Kelly, and the others talking about PokéMorphs as well as when Daisy was trying to get Ash to dance with Kelly. Also, nice touch with the comment about the Pewter Museum of Science and Cinnabar Island’s Pokémon Lab working on reviving fossilized Pokémon. I really liked that.
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TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011
^^ Thank you very much~ =D :iconbowplz:

=P That discussion about Pokémorphs was fun to write, so I'm glad you liked it! ^^

8D That Daisy part was actually inspired from the radioplay script I had written for this episode (which I seem to be failing to find...). I'm glad you enjoyed it!

=] Thank you!
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