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Kelly's Journey - Episode 1 by TrainerKelly Kelly's Journey - Episode 1 by TrainerKelly

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Hello everyone who may be clicking on this episode for the first time, click on this episode as to why it's in their watchbox if I uploaded this forever ago, and what not.

Well, this is the beginning of the edited/updated versions of the KJ episodes! If you don't know what KJ is, it's my rewrite of the Pokémon TV series.

Tweaks in this episode from the previous version includes:
- The fu-gear is now called a Pokélet. It's a touchscreen, tinted blue, and is self-lit. However, it heavily relies on mircochips for its information. It basically does a lot of things that a Pokégear, Pokénavi, and a Pokétch can do. Except it can't play music yet and it's basically in blue (only because of the screen's tint).

- Kelly ties her hair up in a high ponytail with a black ribbon in the beginning of the story, when she goes to rush to Professor Oak's.

- Added a rather long part to after Kelly gets her Ash-rip off jacket.

- Kelly's family has a pet Meowth named Meowthy, named after my cat who died in February 2006. =<

- Kelly's Pikachu curves in like a top of a heart to compliment the generation 4 gender differences. This is how Ash and Kelly tell their Pikachu's apart, which is why I "introduced" this concept earlier than it technically should be. This does take place in about the late '90s. Yet again, not everything in Pokémon was all set in stone in the beginning anyway.

- Added that Kelly's first six Pokéballs all basically contain the same teal/crystal star design.

- Kelly now has a strapless black top with a very low cut back for under herself for when her wings come out, rather than being wrapped. I know it seems a bit sexy for a technical 10 year old, but it's so her wings don't ruin her clothing.

- A few other minor rewrites and changes here and there. Fixed misspelled words, added words where they were needed, yada yada. If you want to know what exactly I changed, read this side-by-side with the original .PDF document.

If you haven't read KJ yet, this is the perfect time to start! Thank you! =D

~ *TrainerKelly (December 2, 2010)

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Episode 1 - [link]
Episode 2 - [link]
Episode 3 - [link]
Episode 4 - [link]
Episode 5 - [link]
Episode 6 - [link]
Episode 7 - [link]
Episode 8 - [link]
Episode 9 - [link]
Episode 10 - [link]
Episode 11 - [link]
Episode 12 - [link]
Episode 13 - [link]
Episode 14 - [link]
Episode 15 - [link]
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:iconsylnodeel:
Sylnodeel Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
Ha XD
I was like '' WTF ?''
My name is Kelly and my dog name's Daisy XDDD
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner May 21, 2012
XDD Interesting!
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:iconsylnodeel:
Sylnodeel Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
XD anyway it's great =)
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
>w< Thank you very much!

I hope you keep reading! =] (...the writing like...jumps in improvement around episode 9 or 10. XDD Probably because I started this particular version in 2007 and I only write between 2 to 3 a year...)
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:iconsylnodeel:
Sylnodeel Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
xDDD
Yup i'll keep reading *-*
It's very good soo ... Yup ♥
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
>w< Thank you~
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:iconxgblue:
XGBlue Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have notice that this and chapter 13 are in PokeFictions. As the stressed, trying-to-tidy-up-the-gallery Co-Founder, I request that you either submit the other 12 or so chapters or remove the two you've already submitted.
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner May 21, 2012
o.o I didn't realize I didn't submit the other chapters. I'll go submit them then. Thanks for telling me!
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:iconxgblue:
XGBlue Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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:iconadenchan:
AdenChan Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm rereading this, and I STILL love it <3 Can't wait until you start updating again!
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
owo Thank you~
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:iconadenchan:
AdenChan Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Welcome x3 I'm on episode 10~
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
owo
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:iconadenchan:
AdenChan Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
x3
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:iconashk1980:
AshK1980 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
Good work on this chapter! This is my first time reading it! I like it so far! I am going to try and read at least one more chapter before I go to class!
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
wgihjregieriog >w< Thank you~ I'm glad you like it so far! =D I hope you continue to enjoy it!

ffff Why doesn't dA have a "ecstatic" emoticon?! I guess :excited: will just have to do.
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:iconashk1980:
AshK1980 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
I am sure I will! I honestly have no idea why dA doesn't have and "ecstatic" emoticon
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
x3

XD Yeah...if I had an idea of how to make one, I would.

...actually, I could. I should.
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:iconashk1980:
AshK1980 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
That would be cool.
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
XD
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:iconwhoawhoaslowdown:
WhoaWhoaSlowDown Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Student Digital Artist
nice fic kelly! :)
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011
>w< Thank you!
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:iconwhoawhoaslowdown:
WhoaWhoaSlowDown Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Student Digital Artist
you're welcome anytime :)
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:iconbunnygirl867:
bunnygirl867 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry to bother you but what program did you use to write it?
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011
Actually, I didn't use a program - I used Google's "Google Docs" service to type up the story. Then I downloaded it as a .PDF for upload and easy reading.
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:iconbunnygirl867:
bunnygirl867 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh Thanks a lot ^^
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011
^^ You're welcome.
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:iconkimichu-sanito:
Kimichu-Sanito Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Um where do i go to few it....?
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011
=] Click "Download File".
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:iconkimichu-sanito:
Kimichu-Sanito Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
..... oh..... -_-' i knew that...
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011
XD
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:iconkimichu-sanito:
Kimichu-Sanito Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
.... *Looks down* And i thought my stories, and chapters were long... *Sigh* It's amazing, but depressing... (To me)
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2011
D8 Don't be depressed! The only reason why I was able to write so much at the time I wrote this chapter (2007, save for two scenes that were added in last year) was because I was following the actual TV series episodes (KJ is primarily a rewrite, after all).

And the only reason why I'm able to write longer stories now is because I participated in National Novel Writing Month ([link]), which pushed me to write lots of words. If you like to write, I actually highly recommend participating. XD Fanfictions are allowed too~

=[ Please don't be depressed!

=] Also, thank you for reading! :iconbowplz: It means a lot to me! =D
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:iconkimichu-sanito:
Kimichu-Sanito Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Maybe... i've been working on mine since 2008, but i'm an ammature writer...
Thanks though!
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2011
I've been writing stories since...2001 or 2002. XD My writing drastically improved when I copied the style of a favourite author of mine though, haha.

=] Keep working at it! ^^ I'm sure you'll do great!
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:iconanimeroleplayer71:
AnimeRolePlayer71 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
This is a cool story. Nice job on it. I can't wait for the next update chapter.
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
=] Thank you~

=P I'm currently uploading all the updated chapters (as well as the new top pictures) onto dA and episode 14 is coming right after! =DD
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:iconanimeroleplayer71:
AnimeRolePlayer71 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
Wow, cool. I will have to take some time to read them all. It may take a while tho. You're welcome.
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
=] It's fine! Take all the time you need~ (I normally don't get any more than three episodes out per year, but that may change soon. =P)
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:iconanimeroleplayer71:
AnimeRolePlayer71 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
Cool. Good luck.
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
^^ Thank you!
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:iconanimeroleplayer71:
AnimeRolePlayer71 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2011
You're welcome.
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the-dragon-childe Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
All right! I'm reading the chapters on the KJ website, but since I don't see any way to review there, I'll just review on dA. xD That said, it'll be pretty point-by-point, since I have two windows up at once. :meow:

So excited she can't sleep, huh? And then running off to start her journey on an hour's sleep, yikes! I really like the angle of the Gameboy games being used as a prep tool. :)

I had to laugh at Kelly thinking Ash's name was funny, I'll admit it. And I love Daisy's introduction - somehow, she really fits into the family. She seems to have traits of both her brother and her mom, and yet something entirely her own. (Plus she's adorable. :XD:)

Aha, so that's why Kelly's outfit is so similar to Ash's! I wondered about that. Very neat. :) And the explanation of the Pokélet is really cool too! The set-up earlier about the family company was a nice lead-in to that, so we weren't left wondering why she suddenly got cool new tech.

You know, in a way, adding new characters made Ash trying to capture his first Pokémon/shocking Misty even more fun! You've got a great handle on weaving new elements into the story from the start - it definitely stays within the spirit of Pokémon!
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
XD Yeah, there isn't anyway to review on there. I may try to or something in the future, but I'm not entire sure! But thank you for reading the website versions! =] I really gotta update them on here.

=P Yep. Smart girl, isn't she? >.> And thank you! ^^ I was inspired by the simulation arcade-like game from episode 9, "The School of Hard Knocks". If they have games like that in the Pokémon World, then why not GameBoy games as a prep tool?

XD Thank you! And YAY!! >w< That makes me happy to here. =] I never realized that myself, actually. I just felt that she did fit into the family (...sometimes I have to be like "wait, Ash doesn't really have a sibling, does he?" when I think about his life in the actual show).

Yep! =] Simply her interest in it~ And thank you! There will definitely be more details too about her family's company too later on. =P

=DD Thank you! (=P My favourite scene from the first chapter is still when Ash tells Pidgey how he's gonna be a Pokémon master and Kelly's just like "Good luck with that".)

=o Thank you! That means a lot! ^^ One of my goals is to still keep the spirit of Pokémon and well...not kill the show/episodes. >_> If it seems like I am doing that, then I'm doing well! Hopefully it'll stay that way!

And thank you for the review! =] I HIGHLY appreciate it!
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:iconnaruto13dragon:
Naruto13dragon Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010  Student General Artist
hi
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
;D Hi~
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:iconnaruto13dragon:
Naruto13dragon Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010  Student General Artist
how r u?
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010
;D I'm good.

lol. Why are you posting this in the first KJ episode.
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:iconnaruto13dragon:
Naruto13dragon Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010  Student General Artist
I was to lazy to go to ur page XD
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010
XD You just click on my name in the artist comments. =P
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