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Hello everyone who may be clicking on this episode for the first time, click on this episode as to why it's in their watchbox if I uploaded this forever ago, and what not.
Well, this is the beginning of the edited/updated versions of the KJ episodes! If you don't know what KJ is, it's my rewrite of the Pokémon
Tweaks in this episode from the previous version includes:
- The fu-gear is now called a Pokélet. It's a touchscreen, tinted blue, and is self-lit. However, it heavily relies on mircochips for its information. It basically does a lot of things that a Pokégear, Pokénavi, and a Pokétch can do. Except it can't play music yet and it's basically in blue (only because of the screen's tint).
- Kelly ties her hair up in a high ponytail with a black ribbon in the beginning of the story, when she goes to rush to Professor Oak's.
- Added a rather long part to after Kelly gets her Ash-rip off jacket.
- Kelly's family has a pet Meowth named Meowthy, named after my cat who died in February 2006. =<
- Kelly's Pikachu curves in like a top of a heart to compliment the generation 4 gender differences. This is how Ash and Kelly tell their Pikachu's apart, which is why I "introduced" this concept earlier than it technically should be. This does take place in about the late '90s. Yet again, not everything in Pokémon was all set in stone in the beginning anyway.
- Added that Kelly's first six Pokéballs all basically contain the same teal/crystal star design.
- Kelly now has a strapless black top with a very low cut back for under herself for when her wings come out, rather than being wrapped. I know it seems a bit sexy for a technical 10 year old, but it's so her wings don't ruin her clothing.
- A few other minor rewrites and changes here and there. Fixed misspelled words, added words where they were needed, yada yada. If you want to know what exactly I changed, read this side-by-side with the original .PDF document.
If you haven't read KJ yet, this is the perfect time to start! Thank you!
~ *TrainerKelly (December 2, 2010)
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