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Kelly's Journey - Episode 1 by TrainerKelly Kelly's Journey - Episode 1 by TrainerKelly

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Hello everyone who may be clicking on this episode for the first time, click on this episode as to why it's in their watchbox if I uploaded this forever ago, and what not.

Well, this is the beginning of the edited/updated versions of the KJ episodes! If you don't know what KJ is, it's my rewrite of the Pokémon TV series.

Tweaks in this episode from the previous version includes:
- The fu-gear is now called a Pokélet. It's a touchscreen, tinted blue, and is self-lit. However, it heavily relies on mircochips for its information. It basically does a lot of things that a Pokégear, Pokénavi, and a Pokétch can do. Except it can't play music yet and it's basically in blue (only because of the screen's tint).

- Kelly ties her hair up in a high ponytail with a black ribbon in the beginning of the story, when she goes to rush to Professor Oak's.

- Added a rather long part to after Kelly gets her Ash-rip off jacket.

- Kelly's family has a pet Meowth named Meowthy, named after my cat who died in February 2006. =<

- Kelly's Pikachu curves in like a top of a heart to compliment the generation 4 gender differences. This is how Ash and Kelly tell their Pikachu's apart, which is why I "introduced" this concept earlier than it technically should be. This does take place in about the late '90s. Yet again, not everything in Pokémon was all set in stone in the beginning anyway.

- Added that Kelly's first six Pokéballs all basically contain the same teal/crystal star design.

- Kelly now has a strapless black top with a very low cut back for under herself for when her wings come out, rather than being wrapped. I know it seems a bit sexy for a technical 10 year old, but it's so her wings don't ruin her clothing.

- A few other minor rewrites and changes here and there. Fixed misspelled words, added words where they were needed, yada yada. If you want to know what exactly I changed, read this side-by-side with the original .PDF document.

If you haven't read KJ yet, this is the perfect time to start! Thank you! =D

~ *TrainerKelly (December 2, 2010)

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Episode 1 - [link]
Episode 2 - [link]
Episode 3 - [link]
Episode 4 - [link]
Episode 5 - [link]
Episode 6 - [link]
Episode 7 - [link]
Episode 8 - [link]
Episode 9 - [link]
Episode 10 - [link]
Episode 11 - [link]
Episode 12 - [link]
Episode 13 - [link]
Episode 14 - [link]
Episode 15 - [link]
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:iconsylnodeel:
Sylnodeel Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
Ha XD
I was like '' WTF ?''
My name is Kelly and my dog name's Daisy XDDD
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TrainerKelly Featured By Owner May 21, 2012
XDD Interesting!
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:iconsylnodeel:
Sylnodeel Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
XD anyway it's great =)
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
>w< Thank you very much!

I hope you keep reading! =] (...the writing like...jumps in improvement around episode 9 or 10. XDD Probably because I started this particular version in 2007 and I only write between 2 to 3 a year...)
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:iconsylnodeel:
Sylnodeel Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
xDDD
Yup i'll keep reading *-*
It's very good soo ... Yup ♥
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:icontrainerkelly:
TrainerKelly Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
>w< Thank you~
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XGBlue Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have notice that this and chapter 13 are in PokeFictions. As the stressed, trying-to-tidy-up-the-gallery Co-Founder, I request that you either submit the other 12 or so chapters or remove the two you've already submitted.
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TrainerKelly Featured By Owner May 21, 2012
o.o I didn't realize I didn't submit the other chapters. I'll go submit them then. Thanks for telling me!
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XGBlue Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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AdenChan Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm rereading this, and I STILL love it <3 Can't wait until you start updating again!
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